CC 进阶：指代与隐性衔接

Coherence and Cohesion (CC) 是区分 6 分和 7+ 分的关键维度。本课时教你如何超越简单连接词，实现高级衔接。

衔接的层次

1. 指代衔接 (Reference)

用代词或指示词回指前文内容：

错误示范:

❌ Technology affects people. Technology can be harmful. (重复) ✅ Technology affects people. It can be harmful.

2. 词汇链 (Lexical Cohesion)

通过同义词、上下位词、相关词汇建立语义连贯：

示例段落:

Universities should prioritize practical skills. These institutions often focus too heavily on theory. Higher education must prepare students for real-world challenges. Therefore, academic programs should include internships and projects.

3. 句式衔接

通过句子结构本身创造连贯：

主题句到支撑句

Topic: Technology improves efficiency. Support: By automating routine tasks, technology allows workers to focus on creative work.

结果句

前: Many students lack critical thinking. 后: As a result, they struggle in university-level courses.

分词短语

Having examined the causes, we can now turn to solutions. Faced with rising costs, many families have cut spending.

4. 避免过度使用连接词

低分文章的典型特征：

❌ Firstly, education is important. Secondly, it creates opportunities. Thirdly, it benefits society. Finally, everyone should be educated.

高分替代：

✅ Education opens doors to opportunity. Without it, individuals struggle to compete in the job market. This explains why governments invest heavily in schools. As educational access expands, so does economic development.

实战练习

改写以下段落，减少显性连接词：

Original: There are many reasons for unemployment. Firstly, automation replaces jobs. Secondly, education does not match market needs. Thirdly, globalization moves jobs overseas.

Improved: Unemployment stems from multiple factors. Automation has eliminated many traditional roles, particularly in manufacturing. Compounding this, educational institutions often fail to equip graduates with skills that employers need. Meanwhile, globalization has relocated production to lower-cost regions, further shrinking domestic job opportunities.

CC 评分标准参考

[!TIP] 写完后大声朗读你的文章——如果听起来像口语表达，说明衔接做得好。